The poem was edited down to fit better with the timeline of the film.
Girl mistakes physical lust for true love which leaves her feeling exposed, vulnerable, a discontent with her life which is empty with a void. she tries to composite for the lack of love by using her body. the constant lovers that she gives herself to is like a drug, always yearning for another fix cause the high of passion never lasts. she continues this pattern causing her to become self destructive failing to see the era of her ways she continues this process (like a child/knows no better). she's still young at heart so the movie will take place in a dream like atmosphere. it will have items that would be in a child's room playing with the contrasting idea of sex and lust and immaturity and innocence. the lighting which is harsh and flashing would cause her to seem more vulnerable to the viewer, light will show her and her actions for who and what she is which she hasn't come to terms with. She's living in a dream like state but some images, colors and music will play with a sinister nightmare feel.
The story is written in The pathetic fallacy or anthropomorphic fallacy which is the treatment of inanimate objects as if they had human feelings, thought, or sensations.The pathetic fallacy is a special case of the fallacy of reification. The word 'pathetic' in this use is related to 'pathos' or 'empathy' (capability of feeling).
As quick as you came you left
by Karee Luna
As quickly as you came you left.
She lays alone now in her bed sheets made of ice.
Last night they were so warm learning stories of native passion calls & positions
moving so lightly & in motion with the tribe dance of love & lust
Same dance with two different reasons behind…
Those sheets, they became a threesome in that bed last night.
becoming the supporter, with every piece of fiber & 400 thread count
clenched between fists, trembling fingers & palms.
between hips & thighs moving to a rhythm of the mating song.
but not now, now they cover her body like the chilling truth,
as quickly as you came you left.
she lays alone, staring at the walls that witnessed the actions of last night.
they were the viewers that caught her become just another body on his list,
watched as he tattooed his name between her hips.
She holds out her palm and mimics the way she held that wall,
the way it promised to support & the way it was supposed to hold no judgement
against her need to believe his precious whispers of security.
but as quickly as you came you left.
She sips from the champaign glass that he didn't finish
It had lost all of it's original bubble and now only resembled the memory of the fresh thirst quenching alcohol,
The recollection didn't seem to be as sweet as she remembered
It didn't satisfy her desire, it didn't end her yearning for a powerful body & full spirit
inside her.
The pathway of her passion yearned to be completed with the intimacy she previously experienced,
as the remembrance of the magic dwindled the sensation for her next fix
became unbearable,
so as quickly as you left she came
to the realization that she needed to continue this habit to feel completed
cause maybe, just maybe the next climax wont be the same
and she wont have to say
as quickly as you came you left
She lays alone now in her bed sheets made of ice.
Last night they were so warm learning stories of native passion calls & positions
moving so lightly & in motion with the tribe dance of love & lust
Same dance with two different reasons behind…
Those sheets, they became a threesome in that bed last night.
becoming the supporter, with every piece of fiber & 400 thread count
clenched between fists, trembling fingers & palms.
between hips & thighs moving to a rhythm of the mating song.
but not now, now they cover her body like the chilling truth,
as quickly as you came you left.
she lays alone, staring at the walls that witnessed the actions of last night.
they were the viewers that caught her become just another body on his list,
watched as he tattooed his name between her hips.
She holds out her palm and mimics the way she held that wall,
the way it promised to support & the way it was supposed to hold no judgement
against her need to believe his precious whispers of security.
but as quickly as you came you left.
She sips from the champaign glass that he didn't finish
It had lost all of it's original bubble and now only resembled the memory of the fresh thirst quenching alcohol,
The recollection didn't seem to be as sweet as she remembered
It didn't satisfy her desire, it didn't end her yearning for a powerful body & full spirit
inside her.
The pathway of her passion yearned to be completed with the intimacy she previously experienced,
as the remembrance of the magic dwindled the sensation for her next fix
became unbearable,
so as quickly as you left she came
to the realization that she needed to continue this habit to feel completed
cause maybe, just maybe the next climax wont be the same
and she wont have to say
as quickly as you came you left
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