Thursday 19 May 2011

rough draft of breakdown of scene by scene

chair and side table… if we cant get the day bed
- she then would b underneath her with the dying flowers , crayon on the table

out of focus, slowly goes into focus and camera moves forward to the girl,
"As quickly as you came you left."

camera pauses

sharp clips side of face, top of head as if hovering or standing above, front of face and should be quite close, (jumps to animals face… repeat between every shot) back to her face. she turns to face camera (front) camera is a little father away,

"She lays alone now in her bed sheets made of ice.
Last night they were so warm learning stories of native passion calls & positions
moving so lightly & in motion with the tribe dance of love & lust"

she's not looking directly at the camera holding a valentines day teddybear

*clip of animals doing mating dance (birds)

"Same dance with two different reasons behind…"

close ups of body and hands as they clinch and unclench the sheets.

"they became a threesome in that bed last night.
becoming the supporter, with every piece of fiber & 400 thread count
clenched between fists, trembling fingers & palms."

clip of flowers dying in the rhythm of a heart beat.
"between hips & thighs moving to a rhythm of the mating song."

her face is dramatically close to the camera (extreme closeup) and the camera falls out of focus and quickly back in the proceeds to move backwards away from her.
"but not now, now they cover her body like the chilling truth,"

She gets up and starts to walk. pick up crayon and places teddy bear down.
"as quickly as you came you left"

Hall way: camera is slightly behind her (showing her body until her knee in shot)
she's walkin and dragging the crayon slightly behind her.

"staring at the walls that witnessed the actions of last night.
they were the viewers that caught her become just another body on his list,
watched as he tattooed his name between her hips."

she places her hand against wall and draws her hand with the crayon.
"She holds out her palm and mimics the way she held that wall,
the way it promised to support & the way it was supposed to hold no judgement
against her need to believe his precious whispers of security. "

the crayon line goes from color to black.
she arrives at the staircase
"but as quickly as you came you left."

at the staircase there 2 glasses, one that is laying on the ground with a little bit of wine left. this showing evidence of 2 people from the night before.

"She sips from the champaign glass that he didn't finish
It had lost all of it's original bubble and now only resembled the memory of the fresh thirst quenching alcohol,"

during this she is slowly walking up the steps

"The recollection didn't seem to be as sweet as she remembered
It didn't satisfy her desire, it didn't end her yearning for a powerful body & full spirit
inside her."

she looks down at the food and wine that is at the bottom of the stairs.

"The pathway of her passion yearned to be completed with the intimacy she previously experienced,
as the remembrance of the magic dwindled the sensation for her next fix
became unbearable,"

animal scene here, music, all 3 clips merging in and out of one another

"so as quickly as you left she came
to the realization that she needed to continue this habit to feel completed
cause maybe, just maybe the next climax wont be the same "

she runs into the room and stops suddenly,
all of the flowers have come back to life, the fruit is fresh again, the teddy bear is back to being whole and all lighting has gone peaceful

her head down and curls blocking her face

"and she wont have to say"

quietness and pause

she looks up slowly directly at the camera and smiles
and then she says out loud "as quickly as you came you left"

camera backs away slowly and eventually out of focus

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